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Unlife

by Ava Blu


I was once told I reach for the stars

			I was once told nothing



I sat

	And looked into everyones eyes

						And heard the Unsaid

I thought of love and yet I was still complacent



Tears

	Stain

		The

			Life

				Book

					

					Yet they are the Unseen



Tears relinquish the soul



Yet they are truly the Unfelt.


01/27/2005
Author's Note: first real attempt at poetry, age 16

Posted on 01/28/2005
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu


Member Comments on this Poem


Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 02/03/05 at 05:26 AM
Jeanna ~ truly unblievable


Posted by Paul Marino on 03/19/05 at 07:55 AM
i agree anya, "tears stain the life book" is an awesome line. quite a debut in the world of poetry.




















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