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Unlife

by Ava Blu


I was once told I reach for the stars
I was once told nothing

I sat
And looked into everyone’s eyes
And heard the Unsaid
I thought of love and yet I was still complacent

Tears
Stain
The
Life
Book

Yet they are the Unseen

Tears relinquish the soul

Yet they are truly the Unfelt.

01/27/2005

Author's Note: first real attempt at poetry, age 16

Posted on 01/28/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 02/03/05 at 05:26 AM

Jeanna ~ truly unblievable

Posted by Paul Marino on 03/19/05 at 07:55 AM

i agree anya, "tears stain the life book" is an awesome line. quite a debut in the world of poetry.

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