| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 01/28/05 at 04:31 AM I understood the Biblical implications, but what I don't understand in this is ~ how is it not our fault? I really do like this, makes me ponder a question I don't ponder often. Good piece, Grey. |
| Posted by Mark Maxey on 01/28/05 at 05:21 AM dude...very thought provoking...great job...note tho...on the line...
the lion eats the Lamb
as the rose begins to blood
The fault was not ours
Silence.
I think you meant to say BLEED not blood...maybe ??
Love your work man! :P |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/28/05 at 03:14 PM from a non-Christian viewpoint, i'm intrigued by this piece... it reminds me of living in the city of angels... it reflects well the atmosphere... and when the acid rain fell upon our heads, we prayed for fresh water... thought-provoking poem that i very much appreciate... blessings... |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 05/13/05 at 06:38 AM I see the flood in this...and the people screaming and then the silence as the water overtakes. And yes there would be mourning...very powerful! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/30/09 at 09:00 PM congrats Bright on your POTD!!! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 07/31/09 at 12:10 AM I hear this while reading and your mastery with words swoops into the entire atmosphere. Fine Art. |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 07/31/09 at 02:17 AM Congrats on you POTD! Excellent Read |
