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newness
by Shonda CreemerI need something clean
a fresh beginning
perhaps another experience
at life
and love
to find beauty
in simplistic pleasures
that first kiss
a gentle whisper
my lovers touch
I am ready
I am waiting
for my elusive
salvation
christening itself
you 01/26/2005 Author's Note: not really happy with this one, but I have written over words so many times all I can see are the scribbles ~ like I said in the first line...
Posted on 01/27/2005
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 01/27/05 at 03:45 AM I really like the simplicity in this. This is going to sound cheesy, but it reminds me of this song in that silly girly movie "Cruel Intentions." I don't remember the title or anything, but I think it's by the Counting Crows maybe?? Anyway, it has the line "I am ready. I am ready for you." The message is the same in both. You are ready and someone will find you. |
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