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Colors Kiss

by Shonda Creemer

purple fingernails
& the flame
of a mauve candle

black ink spills
on the yellow pages
as the orange glow
of the cigarette
reminds me of my temptations

covered by burgundy sheets
underneath an ivory blanket
I’m warm

but Jason Bunny is still blue

a silver ring lays
upon the brown dresser
a symbol of my cinnamon
days with Kaos

for a moment
I am content with my colors

all so different
but each such a part of my life

existence

and I smile at my night

pausing for a drag
another color
gray smoke
reminds me of the cloudiness

but through my faded auburn hair
I can see the brightness
of my room
myself
my rainbow

and for now this
is where I belong
surrounded by my hues
caressed by my thoughts

a mixture I shall never forget

02/08/1998

Author's Note: written a long time ago on a cold, lonely night ~ still there, still cold, still lonely

Posted on 01/23/2005
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 01/23/05 at 08:31 PM

I really like this with the colors.

Posted by Mark Maxey on 01/23/05 at 08:50 PM

you know this piece has a mood and imagery that is so there! Great job! "pausing for a drag another color gray smoke reminds me of the cloudiness" is a great line full of vivid imagery

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/24/05 at 07:42 PM

Shonda, you've written where I live in this poem. It's the world I isolate myself in too often (minus the cigarette). Soon my world will be less lonely because of some major changes in my life. I wish you bright colors on dark days, warm thoughts to heat the chill, and a circle of friends to surround you with love.
~Chelle~

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