| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 01/20/05 at 05:27 AM This brings to mind a thin line between love and hate. Profound, love the contrasts.
Excellent work! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/20/05 at 02:07 PM damn max... brutal stark reality... black and blue in your face of faith... the kicker, and it's a good one... is the truth behind the words... are you ever going to write anything i don't like?... this one is going to weigh on my mind today... excellent... blessings... |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 01/21/05 at 12:27 AM Powerful, dark and deep...Nice to see you writing again, my friend :) |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 01/21/05 at 05:39 AM I really enjoyed the vertical energy of the piece, and the ending is just as starkly powerful as the stabbing of the opening stanza in its own intellectual way. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/22/05 at 11:03 PM wow. max you are the man. the poem is dark but deep...it's very poe...not the writing style but the theme...i love it |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 01/24/05 at 06:25 AM absolutely wonderful as always |
| Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 01/26/05 at 04:48 PM max, you have such a stark, gruesome way of depicting the beauty of life through its ambivalence. thank you for this. i will mull it over and come back. |
