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Topic: Black and Blue

by Melina Raven Maness Diebold

I saw your eyes when I talked to you

and couldn't believe what was staring back

the iris that once was Alice-blue

is now the darkest void of black

The soul that cast it's moral hue

is dead and I can see it's lack

You have an animal's stare, you do

and I can't forsee your humanity coming back

What wasteland must lay full view

under your brows where aquamarine once sat

Is now just ornery onyx orbitals in lieu

A duo of seething soullessness peering back

01/18/2005

Author's Note: topic thread, topic by Marin Kinsley

Posted on 01/18/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melina Raven Maness Diebold

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/19/05 at 05:33 AM

Mina, this is a wonderful interpretation of the topic and quite different from mine. I enjoy seeing the poetic interpretations. Keeps me going. Very good work!

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