Topic: Black and Blue by Melina Raven Maness DieboldI saw your eyes when I talked to you
and couldn't believe what was staring back
the iris that once was Alice-blue
is now the darkest void of black
The soul that cast it's moral hue
is dead and I can see it's lack
You have an animal's stare, you do
and I can't forsee your humanity coming back
What wasteland must lay full view
under your brows where aquamarine once sat
Is now just ornery onyx orbitals in lieu
A duo of seething soullessness peering back
01/18/2005 Author's Note: topic thread, topic by Marin Kinsley
Posted on 01/18/2005 Copyright © 2025 Melina Raven Maness Diebold
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Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/19/05 at 05:33 AM Mina, this is a wonderful interpretation of the topic and quite different from mine. I enjoy seeing the poetic interpretations. Keeps me going. Very good work! |
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