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Freezing

by Tota Longmire

The dark crow caws,
Fluffed against the freezing,
His breath shows wispy white.
Ice tipped wings, held still grimly,
The only thing not pallid.
So cold, the clock hands freeze,
Icicles obscure the time.
Tree branches weighted down,
Rubbing together frigidly.
A colorless path through the coldness,
The ice on the river will always be
Much more fluid when broken.

01/17/2005

Posted on 01/18/2005
Copyright © 2024 Tota Longmire

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/24/05 at 08:29 PM

B-r-r-r-r Tota. I could have used your poem yesterday, it was one hundred and four here....Charlie

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