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Teeth Marks

by Ava Blu

I have to bite you to taste words
--letting my teeth penetrate your simple soul

I desire secrets you only write about
when no one is looking

You hide behind your shadow
keeping truth attached to your veins
--never letting the needles tear a hole

You're so fucking exquiste
You must ration your thoughts
--giving me only a tease

I never claimed to want all of you
So why are you so far gone?

Fine
--I'll spit out the words I stole

--keep hiding--

Until your shadow swallows
your soul.

01/13/2005

Posted on 01/13/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Paez on 01/18/05 at 04:18 PM

I picture one of my favorite singers yelling this through my car speakers, voice and wind entwined as a speed down the highway with no particular destination in mind. Great write, Jeanna-luv. Thank you for sharing it. "You're so $#%@ing exquiste You must ration your thoughts" "Fine --I'll spit out the words I stole --keep hiding-- Until your shadow swallows your soul." I swear, I could have written this.

Posted by Michelle Floyd on 02/05/05 at 04:24 AM

"You're so $#%@ing exquiste You must ration your thoughts --giving me only a tease" -- Love it. Love it love it love it. I too can hear someone crooning this through my speakers.

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