The Storm's Face by Mary Ellen Smith
Home alone and quiet, still.
Thunder beats like a drum.
I hear a throbbing in the east
Grey shades of whats to come
Lightning illuminates these walls
Shatters the night to tears,
And imagine I, the storms dark face
menacing, clouded fears.
He overtakes the sunlights post
And has his way for now,
I see his deep-set angry eyes
Below his wispy brow.
Timidly I dare take a peek
Through the curtained pane.
But tremble at his thunderous speak
And draw it closed again!
01/08/2005
Author's Note: Much thanks to Steve Podielsky for some inspirational changes in wording on this rewrite....
Posted on 01/08/2005 Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 01/09/05 at 06:31 AM WOW! Powerful imagery in this piece. I love storms, especially seemingly violent ones. Excellent writing M.E. This not only contains vivid images but also a lot of emotion perhaps relating to a real person. *favs list* |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/11/05 at 08:19 PM His voice can be rather loud at times. Nice poem Mar....Charlie |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/14/05 at 03:21 PM i love this piece!!!... it flows just like a rolling winter storm... excellent images spring forth fluidly... blessings... |
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