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The Storm's Face

by Mary Ellen Smith


Home alone and quiet, still.
Thunder beats like a drum.
I hear a throbbing in the east
Grey shades of what’s to come

Lightning illuminates these walls
Shatters the night to tears,
And imagine I, the storm’s dark face
menacing, clouded fears.

He overtakes the sunlight’s post
And has his way for now,
I see his deep-set angry eyes
Below his wispy brow.

Timidly I dare take a peek
Through the curtained pane.
But tremble at his thunderous speak
And draw it closed again!

01/08/2005

Author's Note: Much thanks to Steve Podielsky for some inspirational changes in wording on this rewrite....

Posted on 01/08/2005
Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 01/09/05 at 06:31 AM

WOW! Powerful imagery in this piece. I love storms, especially seemingly violent ones. Excellent writing M.E. This not only contains vivid images but also a lot of emotion perhaps relating to a real person. *favs list*

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/11/05 at 08:19 PM

His voice can be rather loud at times. Nice poem Mar....Charlie

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/14/05 at 03:21 PM

i love this piece!!!... it flows just like a rolling winter storm... excellent images spring forth fluidly... blessings...

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