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Ruptured(my first Haiku)

Shattered, Ruptured, Me
All Alone, Without Your Heart
Your Touch, Kiss, And Love

03/02/2003

Posted on 01/06/2005
Copyright © 2023 Ernest A Miller

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Tom Goss on 01/06/05 at 06:16 PM

Simple and elegant - it could use a couple commas though.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/14/05 at 04:45 AM

heartbreak wrapped up in just a few words...

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