Azucena by Melina Raven Maness DieboldShe sits on the pier tossing petals
near the patches of heather and nettle
As she walks home, petals still shedding
leaving a trail like Hansel and Gretel
while the trees mimic and toss leaves
that float down in silence and settle 01/05/2005 Author's Note: ghazal
Posted on 01/05/2005 Copyright © 2025 Melina Raven Maness Diebold
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Posted by JD Clay on 01/06/05 at 02:21 PM This poem carries well, Mina, while holding a natural sweetness and inevitable truism. Good stuf!
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