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Azucena

by Melina Raven Maness Diebold

She sits on the pier tossing petals

near the patches of heather and nettle

As she walks home, petals still shedding

leaving a trail like Hansel and Gretel

while the trees mimic and toss leaves

that float down in silence and settle

01/05/2005

Author's Note: ghazal

Posted on 01/05/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melina Raven Maness Diebold

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 01/06/05 at 02:21 PM

This poem carries well, Mina, while holding a natural sweetness and inevitable truism. Good stuf! Pe4ce...

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