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toes in the ocean
by Bethany Leewhen I stand
where Earth meets Sky,
waves reaching the shore
to tickle my toes
I am bespelled
and I know there is more
in this World than what greets the eye.
but I am even more mesmerized
by my childs face
and the reflection of the ocean in her eyes.
01/04/2005 Posted on 01/05/2005
Copyright © 2025 Bethany Lee
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/05/05 at 09:52 PM I am mesmerised by you poem, very good...Charlie |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 01/07/05 at 12:07 AM stunning, and very very evocative. definitely an 'i felt like i was there' moment. wonderful stuff. |
| Posted by Bradd Howard on 07/08/05 at 07:54 PM this is simply beautiful and the revelation at the end so endearing... love the title as well... great read |
| Posted by Holly H Dunne on 07/28/06 at 09:51 PM such a simple pleasure so eloquently put! |
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