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only a whisper
by Stephanie KentThe wind sifts through the leaves,
scattered earthspun gold,
Until they brush the ground
like the footfalls of passing ghosts. 01/03/2005 Posted on 01/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Stephanie Kent
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 01/04/05 at 09:55 AM Elegance, in 20 words or less - really lovely. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/13/05 at 10:52 PM Love the images in this simple yet evocative piece. Beautifully expressed! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 02/05/05 at 07:36 AM Beautiful and elegant poetry. |
| Posted by Delilah Coyne on 03/24/06 at 12:03 PM Every word is perfect! It flows smoothly and beautifully. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/24/06 at 02:12 PM Like the poem itself, you've given it a soft and gentle voice, Stephanie. It reminds reminds me of the Rocky Mountain Range and how the aspens shimmer in the breeze. Congratulations on becoming The Poet Of The Day.
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| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/25/06 at 04:39 AM Ethereal is the word that comes to mind when I read these words. Like the hush of a snowfall, leaves too have their own language. Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~ |
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