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Seeking Silver

by Uriel Tovar

Flickering flick
My eyes are muddy
But soon focus in.

The marvelous light
delving into the soul
of unknown
strangers
unknown.

crunchy crunch--
POW!
startled at the whole universe
encountering it
being it
loving it.
the kernels are safe on the floor.

"no more...please no more" *cough*

We've seen this before
SLURP
ears twitching but not losing sight
site
sight.

Fin
ally
credits roll.
another 15 down the drain.

01/01/2005

Posted on 01/01/2005
Copyright © 2024 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 01/01/05 at 01:43 PM

Nice snapshot.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/01/05 at 11:12 PM

Good one Grey. The sounds and colors make a vivid blend of visuals. I enjoyed reading it. ;-)

Posted by Karen Michelle on 01/05/05 at 06:42 AM

sounds like escape.

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