| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/30/04 at 07:57 PM like a walk into time past... i journey through this centuries piece reminiscing as if i knew what i was seeing... as if i was one of these ancient beauties... stunning emotion stirred with this one, max... blessings... |
| Posted by David Hill on 12/31/04 at 02:15 AM Original and warm hearted. Better than an urn of ashes. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/31/04 at 04:39 AM A fantastic tribute Max. Well done...Charlie |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/31/04 at 03:42 PM that third stanza is killer...very insightful.. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/01/05 at 07:57 PM This reflective poem (no pun)gives new meaning to; passing time. Intriguing precept, Max.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 01/02/05 at 06:31 AM A beautiful tribute to your grandfather and to the Eternal Circle. A strong reminder of what came before us and how we pass it on to generations unborn. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 01/02/05 at 07:25 AM i love the parallels of death and time, as the generations of a family pass from hand to hand. my, my, such a profound work, and oh, what a swell of a last stanza. i must catch my breath.... |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 01/03/05 at 12:08 PM Strong, insightful and philosophical writing, Br Maxwell...your writing always makes me think.... :) |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 01/11/05 at 01:26 AM Much more endearing than an urn on a fireplace. I think this would be a great bequest to leave to a special loved one, has me thinking of the only affordable legacy for my grandson. Thanks for the lovely inspiration, Max. (good vibes sent in your direction) |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 03/01/05 at 04:03 PM bravo! |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 06/16/05 at 11:13 PM There is so much contained in this little piece. I love the parallels between time and death, between seeing and ghosts. Beautiful work. |
