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someone inspire
by Tim J BonoEntertaining Thoughts
I know I should not
Its raining in my head
My eyes are floating
Like a body
My heart
A relic on the floor
Strike a fire
a heart has expired
I have quaffed myself
into a stupor of depression
I have drunk my feelings
I laugh extra loud
before the doubt comes
rushing back in my lungs
Raping and taking my head
depression thrusting doubt
in and out
let me out let me out let me out
impregnating your lies within me
brooding over my brain
its raining on my mind
somebody inspire
my heart has respired
01/01/2004 Author's Note: "whatever is true, whatever is noble, whatever is right, whatever is pure, whatever is lovely, whatever is admirable -if anything is excellent or praiseworthy- think about such things." Phil. 4:8
Posted on 12/28/2004
Copyright © 2025 Tim J Bono
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 12/28/04 at 03:34 AM Definitely good in this! =) I liked this a lot. Many great lines in this. The last 2 lines are great, "impregnating your lies within me" is a great line, oh the list could go on... |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 12/29/04 at 03:43 AM i don't know how to describe my reaction to this piece! all i can say is that it hit me deep and it hit me hard.. |
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