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Two Lovers Dream (acrostic)

by Shonda Creemer

She dreams of the life
Etched gently within her heart
Reality seems so distant
Expecting more, but receiving
Nothing less than thoughts of him
Does he often dream her dream?
In his heart, with his thoughts?
Pure lovers ~ lonely, lost, looking
Ill-fated they seem to appear
Tomorrow is another chance
Yesterday merely their dreams


12/26/2004

Author's Note: serendipity= a seeming gift for finding good things accidentally

Posted on 12/26/2004
Copyright © 2025 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/27/04 at 06:47 AM

i like it!!

Posted by Ava Blu on 12/29/04 at 12:13 AM

I love this! Very clever as well. =)

Posted by Brian Francis on 12/30/04 at 12:05 AM

Nice one. I love acrostic pieces. Good work --bf

Posted by Sarah Graves on 12/31/04 at 12:03 AM

Very beautiful, these words you write. There is always a chance with love. Great work..

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/31/04 at 04:58 AM

Well done Shonda....Charlie

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