pathetic.org :: Topic: There's an Umbrella Over the Door, Where a Gun Used to Be by Amanda J Cobb

Topic: There's an Umbrella Over the Door, Where a Gun Used to Be

Once I fought against
the world, but now I only
fight against my tears.

12/22/2004

Author's Note: Haiku, yeah. Topic from Joe Chiles, and should read "There's an Umbrella Above my Door, Where they Used to Hang Guns," but that wouldn't all fit.

Posted on 12/21/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda J Cobb

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/23/04 at 05:52 AM

I like the sentiment, although the title is almost as long as the poem. Very good, not an easy topic to work with.

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