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Stone Eggshells

by Tota Longmire

I walk slowly and gently
Upon eggshells of stone
Feet torn and bleeding
I limp onwards alone
Others just stand there
Smooth ground they tread
They look and they laugh
They can't understand
Until they walk slowly
On eggshells of stone

12/20/2004

Posted on 12/21/2004
Copyright © 2026 Tota Longmire

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/21/04 at 01:18 AM

I hate that feeling when it happens. I've written of this, but not with the stone aspect, brilliant.

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