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Glass Tears

by Tota Longmire

Painful glass tears that
Reflect my soul are
Falling, slowly.
One at a time they
Emerge from eyes
Glazed by sorrow
And shatter as
They hit the ground.
See yourself,
Distorted by the curved,
Broken windows of my
Ever aching soul.
Take one look
Then turn and leave.
I watch your back
Reflected in the broken
Pieces of my soul, that lay
Scattered on the floor.

12/20/2004

Posted on 12/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Tota Longmire

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Holly H Dunne on 02/11/05 at 02:01 PM

i love the imagary youve used here, especially in the last part. raw and beautiful at the same time.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/07/09 at 12:11 PM

"Glazed by sorrow" sort of sums up this write. You can feeling it flow in every line. Congratson POTD.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/07/09 at 12:11 PM

"Glazed by sorrow" sort of sums up this write. You can feeling it flow in every line. Congratson POTD.

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