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Mother
by Uriel TovarShe took the flame
And walked away.
The memories aren't the worst part
but they are all she left.
12/15/2004 Posted on 12/16/2004
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/20/04 at 09:26 PM wow...says it all! Great one. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/07/05 at 08:52 AM Memory....a gift that keeps on giving. Great job! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/09/05 at 05:06 PM ...uriel, man a wealth o' feelings, emotions, daily lessons taught all in a few lines...i'm impressed like the other folks...tight write!...peace chaz |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/09/05 at 05:10 PM ...when i say i'm impressed, i'm NOT shocked, your writing is always rife with meaning...so while i was impressed,i just wasn't shocked, i expect good stuff from you...so there! ;-) peace, chaz |
| Posted by Kourosh Taheri-Golvarzi on 06/01/05 at 06:26 AM This is so much better than any short poem I've ever written. Great work, man! |
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