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Acting
by Ava BluNever wanted to be alone
Now desiring it again
We all need time
We all must breathe
A thief has been in my throat
I choke
Air without spirit
A mime has been inside my mind
I faint
No act
They saw you go inside my heart
I kill
No more dreams
And no more me.
12/15/2004 Posted on 12/15/2004
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 12/16/04 at 08:13 PM I enjoyed the 2 middle stanzas a lot, nice job. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 12/17/04 at 03:37 AM i agree tom. the middle two stanzas were the strongest because they conveyed a powerful image and feeling with so few words. well done indeed jeanna. |
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