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"Contemplating"
by Max PhineasCan't decide whether or not to send the letter
Overanalyzing every situation
Never can see beyond the current task
Trying so hard to find you in the
Endless darkness that consumes me
Mend my broken heart
Please don't leave without a last goodbye
Lately things have been so unclear
Always thinking about how it could be
Take away everything, and you're still all I see
In the heat of the moment, I open the mailbox
Note to self- destroy all emotion. I'm
Going overboard
12/13/2004 Author's Note: Wow..I've never done an acrostic before. lol This one isn't too great, I know.
Posted on 12/14/2004
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 12/15/04 at 01:54 AM I think it's great! I'm glad someone can do an acrostic without it being of their name. I love the line "endless darkness that consumes me." I think it is very well-written and gives the reader stuff to think about. |
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