| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/14/04 at 05:15 AM the rhythmn is great to be a song, good job |
| Posted by Kenneth Lau on 12/14/04 at 06:51 AM It sounds like a song ;) cool piece |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 12/17/04 at 04:32 AM Yes, very lyrical.. there's something very musical about it. The words are very relatable, and to the point. Great read.. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/20/04 at 02:39 PM This flows nicely. And speaks with clarity. |
| Posted by Holly H Dunne on 03/13/05 at 07:29 PM well done on communicating a universal theme that will strike a chord with everyone. it certainly did with me. |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 08/06/05 at 05:00 AM Wow I can't believe I didn't read this one... it's really awesome and does sound like a song... it flows when I read it. Heehee it makes me all tingly. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 09/30/05 at 01:50 AM ahhhh the prick of the lie, it bleeds out even in poetry.. nice. |
