Dusk Tears by Sam Roberts
This is a tear falling
And her nakedness for all to see
Scaring red rope,
A little wish, on her lip
Fork lighting; iridescent eyes
Colouring a void
On a pallid background
12/06/2004
Posted on 12/06/2004 Copyright © 2024 Sam Roberts
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/07/04 at 07:21 AM Sam, this is wonderful. The nakedness of raw emotion, not very well hidden. Yeah, I relate. Good work. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/20/05 at 07:41 PM Baring one's emotion and becoming naked to the world is difficult --but liberating. The images haunt and sting and resonate with emotion that ripples through the reader's soul. Thanks for sharing. |
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