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by Melina Raven Maness Diebold

I will meet 23 as Me

not with Joel upon my arm

Not with nor any other

malapropian mate to disarm

I shall meet 23 as Me

with no one to sap my breath

and blow out my candles for me

No unenamored inamorato

to waste my wish upon

I shall meet 23 as Me

I will meet 23

as Melina

12/06/2004

Author's Note: Looking forward to this next birthday

Posted on 12/06/2004
Copyright © 2022 Melina Raven Maness Diebold

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/06/04 at 10:06 PM

Melina, this is wonderful! You Go, Girl! and Happy Birthday.

Posted by Karen Koser on 12/07/04 at 03:36 AM

Excellent! That must be the greatest birthday gift to yourself. Happy Birthday.

Posted by JD Clay on 12/12/04 at 05:02 PM

Ohhhh yeahhhh!!! This poem leaps across the stage with great vibrato! I like the positive energy and strong communicative style right down to the take-charge title in Roman Numerals. Pe4ce...

Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 06/23/05 at 12:44 PM

Old farts together? lol, the next birthday you have to look forward to is 30! :S

yer pal

Jersey

Posted by Roger J Kenyon on 12/29/08 at 07:44 AM

Incredible Melina and thank you for sharing this poem .

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