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XXIII
by Melina Raven Maness DieboldI will meet 23 as Me
not with Joel upon my arm
Not with nor any other
malapropian mate to disarm
I shall meet 23 as Me
with no one to sap my breath
and blow out my candles for me
No unenamored inamorato
to waste my wish upon
I shall meet 23 as Me
I will meet 23
as Melina
12/06/2004 Author's Note: Looking forward to this next birthday
Posted on 12/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Melina Raven Maness Diebold
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/06/04 at 10:06 PM Melina, this is wonderful! You Go, Girl! and Happy Birthday. |
| Posted by Karen Koser on 12/07/04 at 03:36 AM Excellent! That must be the greatest birthday gift to yourself.
Happy Birthday. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 12/12/04 at 05:02 PM Ohhhh yeahhhh!!! This poem leaps across the stage with great vibrato! I like the positive energy and strong communicative style right down to the take-charge title in Roman Numerals.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 06/23/05 at 12:44 PM Old farts together? lol, the next birthday you have to look forward to is 30! :S
yer pal
Jersey |
| Posted by Roger J Kenyon on 12/29/08 at 07:44 AM Incredible Melina and thank you for sharing this poem . |
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