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Dawn

by Uriel Tovar

Blue sky wakes in mourning's rise;
Healing blackened scars.
Light breaks upon shadow's death.

12/03/2004

Author's Note: i know haiku is 5/7/5 but since japanese is a syllabic language and english isn't variations can be made to the form at times.

Posted on 12/03/2004
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/03/04 at 08:27 PM

most enjoyable!!! welcome to pathetic!!

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/03/04 at 08:34 PM

Beautiful image, Grey. Welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 12/15/04 at 08:58 PM

Again you paint a sad but evocative picture. Nicely done.

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