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what would it be?

by Charlie Morgan




what would it be?

if you had a color, your fave,
what would it be?
the hue of yearning, with just
a tint of completion?
maybe a slight persimmon of lust,
an early-birth of love?
perhaps an amber tone of appreciation
with a dab of glaring titanium white.
or pink like a meshbag
filled with baby toes?

12/01/2004

Posted on 12/01/2004
Copyright © 2024 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/01/04 at 09:00 PM

One of the most original poems I've seen. Beautifully done.

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/02/04 at 12:27 AM

Wow, I want to leave a comment ~ but I am truly speechless. I love it, absolutely love it! Wish I knew my color.

Posted by Maude Curtis on 08/07/09 at 01:34 PM

Beautiful write. My favorite color is blue. The color of my sweet grandbabies eyes. Well 6 of the 9 anyway. so I guess my second fav color is brown.

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