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Yeah, i'm a little hurt
by Paul Marinoin there
for an
hour
i looked at
four
maybe
five shelves
of porn
and there
were a lot of
shelves
i laugh at
it now how
i didn't
read but only two descriptions
and when i brought the tapes
up i knew they weren't going to be as good
as i wanted
grand ideas suck 11/30/2004 Posted on 11/30/2004
Copyright © 2024 Paul Marino
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 03/01/05 at 06:54 PM hahahaha, that is great! |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 06/08/05 at 10:28 PM I expected something completely different when I read the title. And I was pleasantly surprised! |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 06/18/05 at 10:36 PM so true, so true. |
| Posted by Jason Wardell on 06/25/05 at 09:05 AM A hilarious scene. The mostly terse lines really convey the impatience and twitchy awkwardness. |
| Posted by Cristy M. on 12/03/07 at 03:29 AM you're a perv. |
| Posted by Cristy M. on 12/03/07 at 03:29 AM i should mention that i've added this to my faves list again. the last time i got kicked off, it was deleted. now it's back.
oh, perv. |
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