| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by S. Pelham Flood on 12/01/04 at 12:44 AM I've been reading through your work...i like this one a lot, very confessionalist, like most of your work...welcome to pathetic |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 12/07/04 at 02:15 AM You know I love this one as well. Very graphic. =) |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 03/01/05 at 07:26 PM i am enjoying everything that i have read of yours so far ... taking a particular shine to this piece |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 03/14/05 at 12:03 AM I really like this. Very vivid piece. Nice job! ~MB~ |
| Posted by Jacki M Butler on 04/21/05 at 10:42 PM A wonderful confessional, and I can relate so much to you in this piece. You write very well. Nicely done |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 07/19/05 at 07:14 PM This is so painfully and beautifully and brutally honest. I am adding it to my favorites! |
