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rain dance

by Bruce W Niedt

 

rattled brain

clattering like dry beans in a can

dessicated from lack of sleep

 

drought of dreams

creative juices absent flow

a cracked river bed

 

you can wait for rain

and turn face up, mouth agape

let it run down cheeks

 

into the mouth, absorb to the skull

or go up

and seed the clouds yourself

 

or is it better to wander the desert

holding your pen like a dowser

looking for underground pools

 

11/25/2004

Posted on 11/25/2004
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/26/04 at 12:19 AM

Bruce, I really like this, since it reminds me how I feel sometimes when I let myself be that way. Great descriptions. We all have that subterranean moisture, but we just don't realize it.

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