Fog & Liquid

by Megan Langley

As my breath fogs the window pane
Chilled air surrounds me like you did
My hands wipe life clear as liquid
Beyond it all, you still remain


Author's Note: I typically don't write short poems but I'm trying... that's why this one is only 4 lines...

Posted on 11/20/2004
Copyright © 2021 Megan Langley

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Trotter on 11/22/04 at 01:03 PM

i really like how you evoke the sense of chillimg memories. well done x

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