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Household Chore

by Jane E Pearce

The vacuum whirs

and sucks up old dust,

smiles, songs  played

by a ragtime band,

racoon coats, and love

long primed and painted

over with new passion.

 

Everything clean,

and fresh , sparkling

with diamonds and turquoise.

No hint of  the refuse

now in that final dumpster,

but sometimes  in the shadows,

I can hear you breathe again.

 

 

11/17/2004

Posted on 11/17/2004
Copyright © 2025 Jane E Pearce

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 11/17/04 at 05:45 PM

I found this on a break from fighting with two hand vacuums that refuse to work properly, so pardon my envy! I think my Shark just died. Great poem, though.

Posted by Christel Crews on 11/18/04 at 03:56 AM

i just finished cleaning my apartment from top to bottom and as i cleaned, i found a book that i friend had left on a visit and the memories of that evening rushed back :)

Posted by JD Clay on 11/22/04 at 01:32 AM

You have a filthy mind, kiddo, hehe! I wonder where all that dirt comes from. With the results of springtime cleaning nowhere to be found, maybe I'll just turn my livingroom in to a Zen Garden and rake the dust all in one direction, yeah, that'll fix it. Good stuff, Jane...pe4ce

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