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"Seeing You"

by Max Phineas

More than I’d enjoy
A symphony
More than I want world
harmony
More than I’d fancy a
Brand new car, I need to see your face again.

For deeper than the ocean floor
And bluer than a pure azure
More soothing than a
Jazz guitar
Are your sparkling, shining eyes

Much softer than a child’s hair
And gentler than a baby bear
And whiter than the
Nighttime stars
Is your brilliant smile.

So maybe when we meet again
Be it dawn or dusk,
By boat or train
Above the rainbow,
On Saturn or Mars
Please just hold me for awhile.

11/13/2004

Posted on 11/14/2004
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rebecca Lin on 11/15/04 at 04:30 AM

I really enjoyed this poem. It is quite lovely.

Posted by Holly H Dunne on 03/13/05 at 06:39 PM

this ones really sweet, gave me goosebumps, something i can relate to. another job well done!

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 06/05/07 at 04:40 AM

Oh how we all long for the past.........longing

Posted by Harold Millican on 01/15/08 at 02:41 AM

Simply beautiful.

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