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topic: Wounded, Shaken, On the Rocks

by Amanda L Marron

He broke apart her heart
The shards of everything that was
Fell to pieces in her hands

He left her on her knees
As she was reaching after him
Screaming out his name

He walked right out the door
Slamming it shut behind him
Never returning again

She just sat there
With the tears of her lost hope
Streaming down her face

11/13/2004

Author's Note: topic provided by Rachelle Howe

Posted on 11/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Paez on 11/14/04 at 01:50 PM

each verse is like a haiku-bead from a bracelet that's been pulled apart. good write, Amanda :) -R

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