| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 11/13/04 at 06:57 PM Wonderful...wonderful...full of emotion, longing, and what every person in this life really strives for...to be loved. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 11/14/04 at 03:47 PM Evanescent poetry, Mike. The lure and elusiveness of that magical moment everpresent in this nicely scripted piece. Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Brett Shane on 11/17/04 at 12:19 PM this makes me really think and wonder how many like those two are out there? and, am i one of them? excellent write! |
| Posted by Jane E Pearce on 11/17/04 at 07:47 PM Lovely poem and wonderful rhyme. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 11/17/04 at 09:50 PM perfect follow-up to the old movie, A Love Affair to Remember, I watched again last night, but they met! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/18/04 at 05:08 AM Yup the way it is. Good poem Mike...Charlie |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 11/08/06 at 02:17 PM This is a really nice piece. I've often cursed the fairytales that give us such expectations, and yet I find myself relating to your young girl. I really like this. |
| Posted by P.T. Brooks on 04/14/07 at 12:29 AM Anticipation contradicting fear, great write mike-pt |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/24/07 at 04:12 AM Hi Mike,
Great write. this is lovely, wondeful, full of emotionals. Who knows they just might meet someday. :) |
| Posted by Angie Jenkins on 10/14/10 at 04:30 PM Wow this is perfect and so true! We all wish to know true love and yet many times don't recognize it/go after it when it's right in front of our faces. Love love love this poem. Snaps for you! |
