|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 11/13/04 at 06:57 PM|
Wonderful...wonderful...full of emotion, longing, and what every person in this life really strives for...to be loved.
|Posted by JD Clay on 11/14/04 at 03:47 PM|
Evanescent poetry, Mike. The lure and elusiveness of that magical moment everpresent in this nicely scripted piece. Pe4ce...
|Posted by Brett Shane on 11/17/04 at 12:19 PM|
this makes me really think and wonder how many like those two are out there? and, am i one of them? excellent write!
|Posted by Jane E Pearce on 11/17/04 at 07:47 PM|
Lovely poem and wonderful rhyme.
|Posted by Maureen Glaude on 11/17/04 at 09:50 PM|
perfect follow-up to the old movie, A Love Affair to Remember, I watched again last night, but they met!
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/18/04 at 05:08 AM|
Yup the way it is. Good poem Mike...Charlie
|Posted by Anita Mac on 11/08/06 at 02:17 PM|
This is a really nice piece. I've often cursed the fairytales that give us such expectations, and yet I find myself relating to your young girl. I really like this.
|Posted by P.T. Brooks on 04/14/07 at 12:29 AM|
Anticipation contradicting fear, great write mike-pt
|Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/24/07 at 04:12 AM|
Great write. this is lovely, wondeful, full of emotionals. Who knows they just might meet someday. :)
|Posted by Angie Jenkins on 10/14/10 at 04:30 PM|
Wow this is perfect and so true! We all wish to know true love and yet many times don't recognize it/go after it when it's right in front of our faces. Love love love this poem. Snaps for you!