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I reach for the light
the veil of darkness rising
there is no escape.

11/10/2004

Author's Note: I thought of this haiku awhile ago and finally wrote it down. It's nothing much, but I hope somebody likes it...

Posted on 11/10/2004
Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Lin

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Kristine Briese on 11/11/04 at 03:31 AM

A nice piece. Welcome to Pathetic.

Posted by Max Phineas on 11/15/04 at 04:59 AM

Ahh- dark, mysterious, and open-ended. =)

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