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wisps of mist

by Emily G Myers

your poetry surrounds me
like wisps of mist
your heart changes quickly
like wisps of mist

better than you know
like wisps of mist
sorry for past hurting
like wisps of mist

got some things from you
like wisps of mist
gave some things to me
like wisps of mist

please forgive me now, for
like wisps of mist
I'll be gone before you object
like wisps of mist

12/08/1999

Author's Note: Jared, of course.

Posted on 10/26/2004
Copyright © 2024 Emily G Myers

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cassandra Leigh on 09/07/05 at 02:33 AM

Interesting assonance, "wisps" and "mist." An effective rhythm.

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