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Unsure
by John HarderSomething about all this
makes me feel uneasy
The surface shows nothing
Nothing that could bring harm
The surface isn't my only friend
Is it even a friend at all?
When I go deep I see things
They make me question myself
Question why I'm doing this
Does it even make sense?
Is there ever a dim moonlight
when there's clouds in my sky
Will I ever show you myself
as these clouds surround my heart?
Is there anything you need to tell me?
"I'm not sure" 10/19/2004 Author's Note: I'm in the weirdest mood right now...
Posted on 10/20/2004
Copyright © 2026 John Harder
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 10/21/04 at 01:07 AM I'm not sure who you're speaking to in this piece, but you bring a sense of depravation to it. It also seems like you're trying to distant yourself from these questions. Well received John. |
| Posted by Christopher J Davidson on 10/24/04 at 11:42 AM Nice work as usual. Second stanza is my favorite by far. |
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