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Sailors take warning. . .
by Stephanie KentHis hazy grey eyes
held more clouds
than the sea at dusk;
And I'm drifting, drifting...
Submerge me in the saltwater of your eyes. 10/18/2004 Posted on 10/19/2004
Copyright © 2024 Stephanie Kent
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/22/04 at 01:44 PM Well, this conveys and conveys in no uncertain terms. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 11/10/04 at 08:23 PM You are an amazing poet if u don't let urself constrain.When u write a small piece like this it is hard to capture and convey in such few words.But i must say u have done a wonderful job right from the title to the very ending.But i love to see u write in longer sentences and capture the essence in ur unique way coz that is the are where u excel even more |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 11/10/04 at 08:26 PM *that is the area where u excel* |
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