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hurts like heaven
by Emily Davidsoni'm over
i'm in love
you now,
with you still,
and it feels
and it hurts
like heaven
worse than ever
to have moved on
and i don't think
i'm sorry for the angry phone calls
i can live like this
but now i finally think i will
i don't think i can
survive 10/17/2004 Posted on 10/17/2004
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Seago on 11/22/07 at 05:14 PM Oh how beautiful! I enjoy the kind of tug-of-war feel this poem creates. Everybody's experienced This, and it's always painful. Trying your best to appear strong, when you're breaking down. Trying to convince the man that you don't need him, as you're dying without him. I think the hardest part, in fact, might be convincing yourself. Great write! + Favorites |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/19/09 at 04:59 PM Beutiful poem! I read it all three ways and loved it all three ways. Very creative, emotional and honest write- thank you |
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