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Remember When

by Shonda Creemer

Remember When…
In an instant that stranger
across from you became your only desire

Remember When…
I love you was softly whispered
(I love you back)
Dreams came into being
Everything seemed perfect

Remember When…
We made love for the first time
Warm bodies in motion
Touching—Feeling—Kissing
Holding each other close
until we fell asleep
in each others arms

Remember When…
You made him doubt
He made you cry, still
We tried to hold on

Remember When…
The love had died
We said good-bye~
to all we had and all
that was never meant to be

Remember When???
I do

Remember When…
It is the end,
all we really have
are our Remember Whens.




06/01/2004

Posted on 10/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/14/04 at 12:35 AM

'Remember When???' Hahahah, this is making me laugh. Remember when one gets into another bout of emotionalism without generating any understanding. One must remeber that love has to be part of a greater understanding if one wants love to survive otherwise as we all know we will be living our yesterdays again and again.

Posted by Richard Vince on 10/14/04 at 10:31 AM

those first three lines took me right back. thanks for reminding me how much happier i am now...

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