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Mark Park

by Charles E Minshall

On Park street down near the park
At Mark Parks Park And shop Mart.
Mark Park dark marked a mark down
But the mark down Mark Park dark marked
Mark Park markedly dark marked wrong.

10/05/2004

Posted on 10/06/2004
Copyright © 2025 Charles E Minshall

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 10/07/04 at 07:31 PM

My! Your tongue is twirling with twisties these days isn’t it? If I were you I’d be having nightly dreams about bare Blair bear stealing woolies from Mark Parks Park on Park street! But where the rest of the gang? Where’s sally? Is she still happily selling seashells by the seashore? Perhaps she’s just cavorting with the woodchuck who chucked too much wood and helped house poor fuzzie wuzzie with no hair cause Blair bear stole it all!? You know, it would be so cool if you could write one that incorporated all these tongue twisted characters together! Kind of like an “Into the Woods” parody or parallel or something…well, just a thought haha Great and fun stuff Charlie!

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 10/08/04 at 08:38 AM

you are the king of the tongue twisters!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/09/04 at 11:38 AM

Hahaha! Right! Get your eye teeth and tongue around this one without flubbing! Wonderful!

Posted by David R Spellman on 10/10/04 at 01:25 PM

Markedly parked right on my tongue and twisted 'round my brain - a delight!

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/24/04 at 12:28 AM

Wonderful! Made my tongue feel clutzy and my brain light. I love it - great work!

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