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The Haunting Call of the Loon

by Jane E Pearce

There's something delicious

about late afternoon,

appetizer to evening's

feast of contentment

Soft lights through pines

stirred by a breeze,

and the haunting call

of the loon.

.

Oil lamps cast shadows

over the gourmet repast,

the Victrola plays songs

that sweeten each taste,

with waltzes more symphonic

at dusk than at noon,

soft velvet night,

sweet velvet night,

and the haunting call

of the loon.

 

10/01/2004

Posted on 10/02/2004
Copyright © 2026 Jane E Pearce

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by John Ilotan on 10/02/04 at 02:28 AM

Beautiful words, a beautiful picture. This takes me there, a wonderful write.

Posted by Mike Loftis on 10/03/04 at 02:06 PM

Jane this is supberb.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/03/04 at 04:46 PM

delicious. Yes, poignant and haunting is the loon. I love the setting, the decor, all of this, as I long for such a place of the soul, and the tranquility and clarity of the loon call

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/03/04 at 07:04 PM

Truly idyllic poem Jane...Charlie

Posted by JD Clay on 10/05/04 at 03:21 AM

The rhythmic lure and mesmerizing feel that permeates throughout this poem fully supports the haunting aura, Jane...pe4ce

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