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Realistic, Wild, and Bare
by Deanna M GritsonisI lay naked waiting for your touch
It is simple
How I look into your eyes
Knowing its love
Simple
No fights or tears
If tears they were dedicated for your absence
Now naked waiting for you
Basing these touches off images
Waiting for those penetrating eyes
The body of a god to touch me
How easy
The passion is wild
The mind realistic
You and I
Those words
Wild and Realistic
I lay naked writing to you
Waiting for your touch
Satisfying my needs
You the only one to know
Fully what it takes
Its a permanent map in my mind
Every inch of a god
You
I pine for it
Wild and Passion and realistic
Blended into us
I lay naked breathing heavy
Waiting for you
After a dream
Naked in thought of you
10/01/2004 Author's Note: It's for you...
Posted on 10/01/2004
Copyright © 2025 Deanna M Gritsonis
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/01/04 at 05:08 PM Yes, realistic, wild and bare, for some one you love. |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 10/04/04 at 03:00 AM This almost seems like a song. I like the juxtaposition between mind and heart- realistic and wild. temporal. It fits all too well becaue the naked appearence, dressed down, and raw with your emotions.
good work. |
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