Pool of rainwater Gathers at my feet Racing from the sky
09/27/2004
Author's Note: This haiku won fifth place in the "Pool" themed aspect of the September contest for the Tadpole Society.
Posted on 09/28/2004Copyright © 2024 Melanie A Bennett
Very well done, Melanie. I enjoyed this one, the last line really has a zip and aha.
very nice indeed. the final line gave me a great image.
