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Have You Ever?
by J. P. DaviesIf you ever,
have you ever?
Loved someone
like it's now or never.
Felt a second could last forever?
Well it has been, can be done.
If sometimes
and sometimes can.
Love for a moment,
let me be your man.
Watch the time count every sand.
This could be, can be the very last one. 09/22/2004 Author's Note: Randomness...
Posted on 09/23/2004
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 09/23/04 at 03:02 PM Well done. I prefer this type of rhyme to the classic "poem-y" style with coupletes or ABCB or things like that. It's pulled together but not cliche. I very unique sort of love poem. |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 09/23/04 at 03:02 PM Well done. I prefer this type of rhyme to the classic "poem-y" style with coupletes or ABCB or things like that. It's pulled together but not cliche. A very unique sort of love poem. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/28/04 at 02:49 AM Well, this is BEING in LOVE, HERE and NOW, from MOMENT TO MOMENT.If I miss myself I am going to miss WHAT IS. |
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