confusion by Kalikala SmithThis seems
slightly out of the ordinary
that one should feel
loved
and unloved.
We whispered sweet nothings
into stale air.
We washed ourselves clean
from our despair.
And now far away
we are desperate to say
we're still in love,
and nothing has changed.
and we're still the same.
stupid and wandering. 09/21/2004 Author's Note: this is probably (is) a load of crap, but i'm feeling on the edge lately...
Posted on 09/22/2004 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christel Crews on 09/22/04 at 10:54 PM hold on there-- this is NOT crap! i think its quite powerful |
Posted by John Harder on 09/25/04 at 05:18 AM dont get too close to the edge. bad things are down there.
i know what it's like to write something that doesnt even relate to you. but if someone can get something out of it then thats still pretty awesome. |
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