| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/14/04 at 01:45 AM I have always loved this one! Glad you posted it again! |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 09/14/04 at 03:32 AM A great lesson in treating each day as if it were your first and last. Universal and timely. Beautifully written. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/15/04 at 01:02 PM Ah Mike, you have some wonderful lines here, my favorite being, �your breath�caresses my neglected skin� � closing eyes closing that insurmountable gap if only for a moment. A touching expression of love propelled by a desperate plea for revival of a dying heart. Very lovely and a great write! :-) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/16/04 at 05:11 PM i find this rather sad, reminds me of love gone cold where one party still longs for the warmth it used to radiate. Lovely read! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/25/04 at 08:51 PM This is absolutely wonderful and paints such a clear picture of how it feels to be in a moment without the one you're with. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/28/04 at 02:25 PM Back again for another read... GAWD, what a line... "kiss me while I'm still breathing." This is my favourite of yours. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 09/29/04 at 08:14 PM stunning in anticipation of one of the pleasures in life we can't put a price tag on. |
