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L.R.C.R. (acrostic)
by Amanda L MarronLonging for you, I can tell you pine for it too
Usurping my feelings into yourself
I still do not deem myself worthy
Seeing is believing, or so they say
Rendering me helpless
At the resonance of your voice
Fond memories keep me going
Always on my mind
Even when I least expect it, there you are
Leaving me with elation
Could you be a little more naïve?
Actions speak louder than words, or cant you tell?
Stare into my eyes and youll see that Im everything I am because of you
Touch me deep
Ive craved for this
Lightly brush your hands over mine
Lean into me
Only make sure to keep us afloat
Reach into my heart and see
Outside the box
Still Im confused
Although your tones change
Readily
I am aware
Occurrences need to happen now
09/11/2004 Author's Note: for Luis Rafael Castillo Rosario
Posted on 09/11/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/13/04 at 11:13 AM One of your better pieces, definitely. *claps.* |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/15/04 at 01:13 PM Ah a lovely plea for love is this! Though urgent and aware of that ticking of the clock as well. I especially like the line, "Reach into my heart and see Outside the box" - there is s subtle and powerful paradox here that captivated me both visually and intellectually. This piece is a good one Amanda and I too join Rachelle in her enthusiastic *claps* :-) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/16/04 at 04:59 PM Yes, this has definitely emanated from a longing, seeking 'occurances', wishing development, positive and yes beautiful. |
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